Have you ever had anything valuable stolen or misplaced? If so, please share your story.

2019-12-04 · 첨삭 강사 Fiona

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Have you ever had anything valuable stolen or misplaced? If so, please share your story. When I was in middle school, I went to academy by bicycle. There was far a little, so I need to take it. After classes, I came to parking lot. I checked the place where the bicycle was parked. I chaecked and double-checked there. But there was bicycles except mine. I searched also other areas with my friends, unfortunately nothing was there. I reminded that I locked my bicycle. But there was nothing. So I was late for coming back home, my father was nervous and came to find me. I confessed about stolen bicycle that was my birthday gift. He was pretty sorry about it. But he bought a new bicycle for me again.

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon Mr. [이름]!

I\'m glad that you were able to do your homework this time even though your schedule is pretty hectic.

Thank you.


WRITING TASK: Have you ever had anything valuable stolen or misplaced? If so, please share your story.


When I was in middle school, I went to academy by bicycle.
>>>CORRECT!
There was far a little, so I need to take it.
>>>It\'s a little far away, so I\'ll have to take it.
After classes, I came to parking lot.
>>>I go to the parking lot after class.
I checked the place where the bicycle was parked.
>>>I checked where the bicycle was parked.
I chaecked and double-checked there.
>>>I frequently check it if it is still there.
But there was bicycles except mine.
>>>But there was a bicycle other than mine.
I searched also other areas with my friends, unfortunately nothing was there.
>>>I searched other areas with my friends, but unfortunately we can\'t find my bicycle.
I reminded that I locked my bicycle.
>>>I remember locking my bike.
But there was nothing.
>>>But it was gone.
So I was late for coming back home, my father was nervous and came to find me.
>>>I arrived home late and my father was so nervous that he went out to find me.
I confessed about stolen bicycle that was my birthday gift.
>>>I told them my bicycle was stolen.
He was pretty sorry about it.
>>>He was pretty upset about it.
But he bought a new bicycle for me again.
>>>But he bought me a new bike again.
 

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