Have you ever had or heard of a dream that foretold the future?
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I have heard of dreams that foretold the future in the TV show. Some dreams predicted the death of important people. And some dreams even predicted the World War II. I think that they are not easy to deny because they are 100% fact.
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I have heard of dreams that foretold the future in the TV show.
>> I have heard of dreams that foretold the future in TV shows.
Some dreams predicted the death of important people.
>> correct
And some dreams even predicted the World War II.
>> And some dreams even predicted World War II.
I think that they are not easy to deny because they are 100% fact.
>> or: I think that they are not easy to deny because they actually happened.
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