Have you ever had to change the way you speak, or the way you act? Why?

2022-08-25 · 첨삭 강사 Kate

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Before, I was very introverted to the other people that I meet for the first time. Because of this personality, I only had a few friends around me. But one day, I saw a classmate who has really lots of friends, and I felt it is really cool and I wanna be like that. Since then, I started to try to change the way I speak and act. I thought that if I speak and act like an extrovert, then I will be an extroverted people. Because of this reason, I tried to change the way I say and behave before.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

Thanks for sharing your experience about it. At some point, all of had tried to fit in with other people. It\'s admirable. Anyway, you did a good job. See you tomorrow!

~~Teacher Kate

Before, I was very introverted to the other people that I meet for the first time.

>>CORRECT!
Because of this personality, I only had a few friends around me.

>>CORRECT!
But one day, I saw a classmate who has really lots of friends, and I felt it is really cool and I wanna be like that.

>>But one day, I saw a classmate who really has lots of friends, and I thought it was really cool and I wanna be like that.
Since then, I started to try to change the way I speak and act.

>>CORRECT!
I thought that if I speak and act like an extrovert, then I will be an extroverted people.

>>I thought that if I speak and act like an extrovert, then I will be an extroverted person.
Because of this reason, I tried to change the way I say and behave before.

>>Because of this reason, I tried to change the way I speak and behave before.

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