Have you ever had to change the way you speak or the way you act? Why?

2019-10-10 · 첨삭 강사 May

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I have a difficulty to speak out in front of the people and I feel like that I tend to equivocate at the end of the sentence. So, I have tried to fix my habit consciously. The one thing I did these days is reading a book or news out. I am not sure how effective this method is and I feel like that it\'s really annoying. Second thing I tried to change is the way to communicate with people. I am a quite straightforward person. It can be a strength and weakness. Most of my friends like my personality but some people have been hurt because I used to say something that might hurt people. I have learnt that I didn\'t need to say something frankly.

강사 첨삭

Good morning [이름]! Thanks for doing your homework. See you next class. ^^

~~Teacher May~~

I have a difficulty to speak out in front of the people and I feel like that I tend to equivocate at the end of the sentence.

>> I have a difficulty to speak in public and I feel like I tend to equivocate.

So, I have tried to fix my habit consciously.

>> So, I tried to fix my habit consciously.

The one thing I did these days is reading a book or news out.

>> One thing I do these days is reading a book or news.

I am not sure how effective this method is and I feel like that it\'s really annoying.

Second thing I tried to change is the way to communicate with people.

I am a quite straightforward person.

It can be a strength and weakness.

Most of my friends like my personality but some people have been hurt because I used to say something that might hurt people.

I have learnt that I didn\'t need to say something frankly.

>> CORRECT

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