Have you ever had to step in and help during a difficult time for a family member? What did you do?
학생이 쓴 원문
A few years ago, my elder brother\'s wife and brother often fought each other.
My brother was having hard time, I frequently told him \"it\'s okay and it will past.
At that time , I activtly stepped in them.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ju Mi! Sometimes, we have to step in and help the people we love and care for. ^^ Have a good day! See you tomorrow!
~T. Jewel
A few years ago, my elder brother\'s wife and brother often fought each other.
>>A few years ago, my elder brother and his wife often fought.
My brother was having hard time, I frequently told him \"it\'s okay and it will past.
My brother was having hard time, I frequently told him \"it\'s okay and it will past.
>>My brother was having a hard time, and I frequently told him, \'It\'s okay, it will pass.\'
At that time , I activtly stepped in them.
At that time , I activtly stepped in them.
>>At that time, I actively stepped in to help them.
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