Have you ever had to step in and help during a difficult time for a family member? What did you do?

2024-10-23 · 첨삭 강사 Ryka

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I remember being in the hospital for a very long time when my dad had surgery. My time at the hospital was extremely boring.

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Hi! I’m thrilled that you took the time to complete the homework. Your experiences and ideas were shared wonderfully—keep up the fantastic work!^^
~~Teacher Ryka^^

I remember being in the hospital for a very long time when my dad had surgery. My time at the hospital was extremely boring.
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I remember being in the hospital for a very long time when my dad had surgery. My time there was extremely boring.

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