Have you ever had your holidays ruined because of bad weather? Tell me about it
학생이 쓴 원문
Last sunday, I wanted to go to the park. Because I wanted ridden a bicycle.
But that day weather was a raining day.
So I\'m so angry and disappointed.
강사 첨삭
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Thank you so much for doing your homework.
Enjoy your night! :)
~ T. Tricia
Last sunday, I wanted to go to the park. Because I wanted ridden a bicycle.
>> Last Sunday, I wanted to go to the park because I wanted to ride a bicycle.
But that day weather was a raining day.
>> But that day\'s weather was a rainy day.
So I\'m so angry and disappointed.
>> So, I\'m was angry and disappointed.
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