Have you ever had your wishes come true?

2014-01-29 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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I grew up in a rural area and I wished to go to school in Seoul. My wish came true when I went to high school in Seoul.I wished I could live with my mother together when I was young because she lived in the other city to support her family by making money. After graduating from high school, I lived together with my mother and two old brothers although the room we rent was as small as about six square meters without a living room or a bath room. There were five or six tenants in the house and we had to share the well, the restroom and even the kitchen. But we were happy because we could live together. I always wanted to go to university and the dream came true. I wanted to pass the Certified Public Accountant exam and I achieved it. Your dream or wishes do not come true by itself. You should put all your energy in to it to make it happen although it seems impossible. In order to have your wish come true, you should set up your objectives and make an effort accordingly. No pain no gain.

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Good afternoon Sir [이름]!Thank you for sharing this story with me. I hope that all of your dreams will come true. It is true that we need to work hard to achieve our goals. We should also be a positive thinker. I am sure that you will be able to reach your dreams because you are determined to achieve them. I wish you all the best this year. ^^ Take Care! See you in class! Teacher Nina   I grew up in a rural area and I wished to go to school in Seoul. >> Correct! My wish came true when I went to high school in Seoul. >> Correct! I wished I could live with my mother together when I was young because she lived in the other city to support her family by making money. >> Did you meanL I wished that I could live with my mother when I was young because she lived in another city to support her family. >> OR: I wished that I could live together with my mother when I was young. It is because lived in another city to earn money for her family. After graduating from high school, I lived together with my mother and two old brothers although the room we rent was as small as about six square meters without a living room or a bath room. >> Did you mean: After high school, I lived together with my mother and two older brothers, although the room we rented was as small as six square meters without a living room or a bath room. >> OR: After I graduated from high school, I stayed with my mother and two older brothers in a room where there was no bathroom and living room, it was as small as six square meters. There were five or six tenants in the house and we had to share the well, the restroom and even the kitchen. >> Correct! >> OR: There were around five to six tenants in the house and we need to share the well, the restroom and even the kitchen. But we were happy because we could live together. >> Correct! I always wanted to go to university and the dream came true. >> I always wanted to go to university and my dream came true. I wanted to pass the Certified Public Accountant exam and I achieved it. >> Correct! Your dream or wishes do not come true by itself. >> Your deams or wishes don\'t come true by itself. You should put all your energy in to it to make it happen although it seems impossible. >> You should put all of your energy into it and make it happen although it seems impossible. >> OR: You shold exert effort to make it happen even if it seems impossible. In order to have your wish come true, you should set up your objectives and make an effort accordingly. >> In order for your wish to come, you should set up your objectives and make an effort accordingly. No pain no gain. >> Correct! >> OR: No pain, no gain.

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