Have you ever helped someone that you didn't know? What did you do?

2015-12-30 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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Whenever I pass by a homeless person or a beggar begging on the street, I become dithering for a second over whether I should give him a penny or just ignore him. I’m often in two minds: helping them or just closing my eyes. Shortly, I have rarely helped them. I think that I’m not accustomed to helping others. Helping others like donations or voluntary support for your community needs courage and you have to be used to doing that. Otherwise, you might feel uncomfortable and awkward when you try to help others even though it is virtue. Once you ignore it twice or triple, then you will get used to and it will form your personality as a very dry and stingy person. There are a lot of TV programs or campaigns on the social networking depicting persons who are suffering a lot and in desperate need for medical treatments or financial support. The stories are very touching and you can easily help them by just dialing your phone. Once you make a phone call, 2,000 won will be donated.

강사 첨삭

Hello there Sir [이름]!

Thank you so much for your time.

The year 2015 is about to end.

I am so grateful that you are my student and that we are partners in learning English.

I can\'t help but smile whenever I hear your voice and your ideas. ^^

You don\'t fail to make me happy in class.

Happy New Year! Kindly extend my greetings to your family.

Can\'t wait to talk to you.

All of your ideas that you wrote below are wonderful,

I was just surprised that when you make a phone call, 2,000 won will be donated.

Thanks for that information.

See you.

Teacher Nina


Whenever I pass by a homeless person or a beggar begging on the street, I become dithering for a second over whether I should give him a penny or just ignore him.

>> correct

I’m often in two minds: helping them or just closing my eyes.

>> correct

Shortly, I have rarely helped them.

>> Better: In short, I have rarely helped them.

I think that I’m not accustomed to helping others.

>> correct

Helping others like donations or voluntary support for your community needs courage and you have to be used to doing that.

>> correct

Otherwise, you might feel uncomfortable and awkward when you try to help others even though it is virtue.

>> correct

Once you ignore it twice or triple, then you will get used to and it will form your personality as a very dry and stingy person

>> Once you ignore it twice or thrice, then you will get used to and it will form your personality as a very dry and stingy person.

There are a lot of TV programs or campaigns on the social networking depicting persons who are suffering a lot and in desperate need for medical treatments or financial support.

>> correct

The stories are very touching and you can easily help them by just dialing your phone.

>> correct

Once you make a phone call, 2,000 won will be donated.

>> correct

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