Have you ever helped someone who was feeling stressful?
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Here are my corrections for you:
I always help for my co-worker.
>> I always help my co-worker.
Before i said to you that my job must meet client for complain, and our co-worker always preparing for this client.
>> I told you before that my job is to meet clients with a complain and my co-worker always prepares for the client.
And after they meeting, we must feedback explain detail with our co-worker.
>> After we have a meeting, we must give a feedback and explain the details with my co-worker.
You know, all co-worker didn\'t great explain to client, someone misunderstood client complain thing.
>> You know, all of my co-workers doesn\'t provide a great explanation to the clients, they misunderstand the clients complains.
So that time, client wax indignant to our co-worker.
>> So at that time, the clients were indignant to my co-workers.
And after meeting, co-worker feeling stressful and i took him to smoking area for smoke.
>> After the meeting, my co-worker was feeling stressful so I took him to the smoking area for a smoke.
When i smoked with my co-worker, i always heard his stressful thing.
>> When I smoke with my co-worker, I always listen to him talk about his stressful situation.
That is my way for helped my co-worker.
>> That is my way of helping my co-worker.
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