Have you ever intoduced yourself to a stranger in public? what did you say?

2023-03-15 · 첨삭 강사 Kristine

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Yes. When i went to the club for learning about real estate market trends, i said, hello ~ My name is jung mi-[이름]. I live in Busan, and i\'m 42years old. I am investing to real estate and also , i am a housewife. Thank you.

강사 첨삭

Hi Bella!

Thanks for doing your homework! Let\'s learn more greetings tomorrow.

- Kristine ^^

Yes. When i went to the club for learning about real estate market trends,

>> Yes, when I went to the club to learn about real estate market trends.
i said, hello ~ My name is jung mi-[이름]. I live in Busan, and i\'m 42years old.

>> I introduced myself as jung Mi-[이름]. I am 42 years old and I live in Busan.
I am investing to real estate and also , i am a housewife.

>> I\'m a housewife who also invests in real estate.
Thank you.

>> Correct.

Or >> Thank you so much.

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