Have you ever left discrimination from other people before? How should we deal with it?
학생이 쓴 원문
I don\'t know if you know this, There\'re a lot of conflicts between men and women in Korea. So It\'s hard to answer this question. I hope to live that we can understand each other. That\'s not the case in reality.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]:)
At some point in our lives, we can feel discrimination from other people but there is always a good way to properly handle it. These things should not affect us in a negative way but let it be something positive that can motivate us to become better people.
I don\'t know if you know this, There\'re a lot of conflicts between men and women in Korea.
>> I don\'t know if you know this, but there are a lot of conflicts between men and women in South Korea.
So It\'s hard to answer this question.
>> That is why it is hard to answer this question.
I hope to live that we can understand each other.
>> I hope to live in a world where we can understand each other.
That\'s not the case in reality.
>> Although, that is not the case in the reality that we live in right now.
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