Have you ever noticed anyone ever feeling pressured to be more beautiful?

2020-01-30 · 첨삭 강사 Tricia

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I haven\'t noticed anyone who I know feeling pressured to be more beautiful. Most of actors and singers feel pressured to be more beautiful. Because they have to be known by people in their line of work. So, I saw many actors and singers suffering from anorexia and depression.

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- Tricia

I haven\'t noticed anyone who I know feeling pressured to be more beautiful.
>> CORRECT!

Most of actors and singers feel pressured to be more beautiful.
>> CORRECT!

Because they have to be known by people in their line of work.
>> CORRECT!

So, I saw many actors and singers suffering from anorexia and depression.
>> CORRECT!

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