Have you ever regretted not saying something to someone?
학생이 쓴 원문
When I was in university. I couldn\'t a girl who was a classmate that I liked her. At that time, I had no plan for my furture. I didn\'t know what to do for my furture. I just worked for my Volunteering club. Everybody knew that I like her, she liked me. One friend pushed me to tell it, but I couldn\'t. Looking back now, it wasn\'t a proposal. It just was making a girl friend. I regretted it for 10 years. However, it is a good memory now.
강사 첨삭
Your writing is getting better, especially your sentence structure and use of connectors. Focus on expanding your vocabulary and varying sentence lengths in your writing.
- Teacher Angela
When I was in university. I couldn\'t a girl who was a classmate that I liked her.
>> When I was in university, there was a girl who was a classmate that I liked, but I couldn\'t tell her.
At that time, I had no plan for my furture.
>> At that time, I had no plan for my future.
I didn\'t know what to do for my furture.
>> I didn\'t know what to do for my future.
I just worked for my Volunteering club.
>> I just worked for my volunteering club.
Everybody knew that I like her, she liked me.
>> Everybody knew that I liked her, and she liked me.
One friend pushed me to tell it, but I couldn\'t.
>> One friend encouraged me to tell her, but I couldn\'t.
Looking back now, it wasn\'t a proposal.
>> Looking back now, it wasn\'t really a proposal.
It just was making a girl friend.
>> It was just about making a girlfriend.
I regretted it for 10 years. However, it is a good memory now.
>> I regretted it for 10 years. However, it\'s a good memory now.
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