Have you ever returned something to the shop you bought it from? Why did you return it? Did you get

2022-11-22 · 첨삭 강사 Maine

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Yes. I have recieved a defective product. It was a tuna can. I usually eat some tuna can with ramen or some kimchi soup. So I was bought a bundle of tuna cans at the groceries store. I knew that can have very long expiration date. It is almost a few years. So I didn\'t think about that date I just bought. But when I was open the tuna can it was rotten. That color was black and it isn\'t seems like tuna it was a black meterial. I was surprised and I go back to the store and showed that tuna can. But that time, the staff said it is not our fault and they recommend call the tuna company. I was upset but there was a nothing I could do so I called the company. And fortunately they were so kind and the make amends immidiately. They asked my house and next day they came to my house and saw that tuna and they took it. And they gived me a new bundle of tuna can. Suddenly I got so many tuna cans.. so everyday I eat tuna in a while.

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Hello [이름] [이름]!
This is a surprising story.  It\'s good that you complained about it.  It is your right to do so for your own safety and money.  Was it delicious? ^^


~T. Maine


Yes. I have recieved a defective product. 
>>Yes, I have received a defective product before. 
It was a tuna can.
>> Correct. 
I usually eat some tuna can with ramen or some kimchi soup.
>> I usually eat some canned tuna with ramen or kimchi soup. 
So I was bought a bundle of tuna cans at the groceries store.
>> So I bought a bundle of canned tuna in the grocery store. 
 I knew that can have very long expiration date.
>>I knew that those cans have very long expiration dates. 
It is almost a few years. 
>> Correct. 
So I didn\'t think about that date I just bought.
>> So I didn\'t think about the expiration dates. 
But when I was open the tuna can it was rotten. 
>> But when I opened a can, it was rotten. 
That color was black and it isn\'t seems like tuna it was a black meterial.
>> The color was black and it didn\'t seem like tuna at all.  It was a black material. 
I was surprised and I go back to the store and showed that tuna can.
>>I was surprised and I went back to the store to show that tuna can. 
But that time, the staff said it is not our fault and they recommend call the tuna company.
>>But that time, the staff said it was their fault and they recommended to call the tuna company. 
I was upset but there was a nothing I could do so I called the company.
>> I was upset but there was nothing I could do, so I called the company. 
And fortunately they were so kind and the make amends immidiately.
>>Fortunately, they were so kind and made amends immediately. 
They asked my house and next day they came to my house and saw that tuna and they took it.
>> They asked for my house and the next day, they came and saw that tuna and took it. 
And they gived me a new bundle of tuna can.
>> They gave me a new bundle of canned tuna. 
Suddenly I got so many tuna cans.. so everyday I eat tuna in a while.
>> Suddenly, I got so many tuna cans.  So I ate tuna most of the day in a while. 

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