Have you ever revealed someone\'s secret when you weren\'t supposed to? Answer in 5 to 10 sentences:
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From my memory, I didn’t revealed someone’s secret by intention or out of awareness. (Maybe the other can remember my mistakes…)
>>> From my memory, I didn\'t reveal someone\'s secret intentionally or out of my awareness. (Maybe people can remember my mistakes.)
But I have some experience, the someone revealed our secret without consciousness.
>>> But I experience someone reveling our secret without consciousness.
I was around 13 years old and I was hanging out with my friends.
>>> It was when I was 13 years old and I was hanging out with my friends.
We were split up into groups and I was getting together with one of my young friend.
>>> correct
We ate secretly some sweeties and hided it in our secret places.
>>> We secretly ate some sweets and hid it in our secret places.
In that time, suddenly the other friends came into my room.
>>> During that time other friends came into my room.
Even they didn’t know the existence of the sweeties and didn’t asked something to eat, my young cute friends was very startled, so he suddenly said, “We don’t have anything to eat.”
>>> Even if they didn\'t know about the sweets and didn\'t ask anything we were startled and my friend suddenly said, “We don’t have anything to eat.”
Fortunately, the friends didn’t aware of the strangeness, but I was embarrassed.
>>> Fortunately, my friends wasn\'t aware of the strangeness, but I was still embarrassed.
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