Have you ever seen a case of bullying in your school or at work?

2018-10-26 · 첨삭 강사 Blair

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When I was in elementery school, I saw that strong people were bullying weak people. To become to middle school students, now I can't see like that case. I think bullying weak people is worse. I hate like that person. Because my friends also bullying by another students. Now he is fine, but he can't remove that memory forever.

강사 첨삭

When I was in elementery school, I saw that strong people were bullying weak people. To become to middle school students, now I can\'t see like that case. I think bullying weak people is worse. I hate like that person. Because my friends also bullying by another students. Now he is fine, but he can\'t remove that memory forever.


When I was in elementery school, I saw strong people bullied weak people. Now that I have become a middle school student, I haven\'t seen such a case. I think bullying weak people is worse. I hate those kinds of people because my friends were also bullied by other students, now he is fine but he cannot forget that memory forever.

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