Have you ever seen a very bad accident? What happened?

2014-04-17 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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Fortunately, I have not seen a very bad accident in person. It goes without saying that, it would be awful experience for someone to witness the scene of a dramatic and tragic accident such as car accidents or natural disasters. If he/she has gotten into the traumatic or terrifying accident in which serious physical harm occurred or was threatened, the situation would be worse. They often cannot stop remembering it. They will suffer from a nightmare, which makes them impossible to live a normal life. The symptom is called Post-Traumatic Stress Disorder. The worse the trauma, the more likely a person will develop PTSD, and the worse the symptoms. The most severely affected are unable to work, have trouble with relationships, and have great difficulty parenting their children. It even can develop to alcohol abuse or taking his/her own life. Our society should pay close attention to those victoms to help them recover as fast as possible.

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Good evening Sir [이름]! How do you feel today? Happy Thursday! I hope you are doing great. Thank you for writing an essay.^^ You did a fantastic job! Please be careful with the usage of articles. ^^ Oh! I do agree with you. Do you like watching videos on the internet such as news, movies, etc? Tell me your answers in class. See you!Teacher Nina   Fortunately, I have not seen a very bad accident in person. >> Correct! It goes without saying that, it would be awful experience for someone to witness the scene of a dramatic and tragic accident such as car accidents or natural disasters. >> It goes without saying that, it would be an awful experience for someone to witness a scene of a dramatic and tragic accident such as car accidents or natural disasters. If he/she has gotten into the traumatic or terrifying accident in which serious physical harm occurred or was threatened, the situation would be worse. >> If he/she has gotten into the traumatic or terrifying accident in which serious physical harm occurred or it was threatening, the situation would be worse. They often cannot stop remembering it. >> Correct! They will suffer from a nightmare, which makes them impossible to live a normal life. >> They will suffer from nightmare, which makes them impossible to live a normal life. The symptom is called Post-Traumatic Stress Disorder. >> Correct! The worse the trauma, the more likely a person will develop PTSD, and the worse the symptoms. >> Correct! The most severely affected are unable to work, have trouble with relationships, and have great difficulty parenting their children. >> Correct! It even can develop to alcohol abuse or taking his/her own life. >> Correct! Our society should pay close attention to those victoms to help them recover as fast as possible. >> Correct!

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