Have you ever spoke in front of a large group of people? How did it go?
학생이 쓴 원문
There was a Dharma gathering in temple where I worked before on Sundays.
We talked about our practicing experience during the Dharma gathering.
I've spoken to a large group three times at that time.
The temple was a international Zen center and there were many foreigners, so I had to speak in English.
At first, I wasn't good at English so I used crib sheets.
However, my spoken English has improved much so the second time, I could speak well better than before.
I spoke in Korean for Korean and a person who can speak both English and Korean interpreted for foreigners a third time.
It was not easy to speak in front of a large group of people to me, but I could gain confidence and get any better after three dharma gathering.
강사 첨삭
Hello Jenny! Thank you very much for making you homework. I noticed that you really made an effort. You committed some mistakes but just the basic ones. However, if you do not want to commit the same mistake again, please review your corrections.
~Teacher Nova
There was a Dharma gathering in temple where I worked before on Sundays.>> There was Dharma gathering in the temple where I worked on Sundays before.
We talked about our practicing experience during the Dharma gathering.
We talked about our practicing experience during the Dharma gathering.
>> We talked about our practices and experiences during the Dharma gathering.
I\'ve spoken to a large group three times at that time.
I\'ve spoken to a large group three times at that time.
>> I\'ve spoken to a large group of people three times.
The temple was a international Zen center and there were many foreigners, so I had to speak in English.
>> The temple was an international Zen center and there were many foreigners, so I had to speak in English.
At first, I wasn\'t good at English so I used crib sheets.
>> The temple was an international Zen center and there were many foreigners, so I had to speak in English.
At first, I wasn\'t good at English so I used crib sheets.
>> At first, I wasn\'t good in English so I used notes.
However, my spoken English has improved much so the second time, I could speak well better than before.
However, my spoken English has improved much so the second time, I could speak well better than before.
>> Correct
I spoke in Korean for Korean and a person who can speak both English and Korean interpreted for foreigners a third time.
>> I spoke in Korean to Koreans and for those who can understand the language.
It was not easy to speak in front of a large group of people to me, but I could gain confidence and get any better after three dharma gathering.
I spoke in Korean for Korean and a person who can speak both English and Korean interpreted for foreigners a third time.
>> I spoke in Korean to Koreans and for those who can understand the language.
It was not easy to speak in front of a large group of people to me, but I could gain confidence and get any better after three dharma gathering.
>>It was not easy to speak in front of a large group of people for me, but I could gain confidence and get any better after three dharma gathering.
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