have you ever taken any diet supplements?
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No, I haven,t. I think the effect of diet supplement is very inadequate. So when i was on diet, I do aerobic exercises.
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Hello!
Thank you for accomplishing your homework! Writing some sentences in English also contribute to your constant practice. Stay positive, work hard, and success will be knocking on your door. Keep up the good work! I believe in you. See you in class!
-- T. Lexie >_<
>> GOOD!
I think the effect of diet supplement is very inadequate.
>> I think the effect of diet supplements is very inadequate.
So when i was on diet, I do aerobic exercises.
>> So when I am on a diet, I do aerobic exercises as well.
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