Have you ever taken part in a singing competition?
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No, i have never taken part in a singing competition.
When i was young about 8 to 11 years.
I was a member of the Goyang City Boys and Girls Choir.
I went choir room every Saturday, it\'s very fantastic experience.
I was the alto part leader. because my voice is very loud.
We attended many performances. we participated in several competitions, but did not win any awards.
강사 첨삭
Good day, Dan!
Wow, It\'s nice to hear these stories about you. Truly we shouldn\'t judge a book by its cover, because I didn\'t realize that you can do this and even play basketball. Enjoy life and thanks for sharing this!
T. Aki~
No, I have never taken part in a singing competition.
>>> CORRECT!
When I was young about 8 to 11 years.
>>> CORRECT!
I was a member of the Goyang City Boys and Girls Choir.
>>> CORRECT!
I went choir room every Saturday, it\'s very fantastic experience.
>>> I went to choir practice every Saturday, it\'s a really fantastic experience.
I was the alto part leader. because my voice is very loud.
>>> CORRECT!
We attended many performances. we participated in several competitions but did not win any awards.
>>> CORRECT!
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