Have you ever thought of fighting crime by becoming a police officer?
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Of course it is a great job because they make our society much better to live!
But honestly, I don\'t have any interest to be a police officer.
I think police officer must have good fitness and high social responsibility but I am a bit introverted person so it\'s not for me.
However, people around me who want to work at police station always say they hope to become a help to public.
So, whenever I hear it, I feel respectful to them.
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Hello [이름] Ha! Thank you for sending your composition. I have the same thoughts as you. I think that being a public servant is not for everyone but we could somehow contribute to make safer community.~~T.Dee
Of course it is a great job because they make our society much better to live!
>>Of course, it is a great job because they make our society much better to live in!
But honestly, I don\'t have any interest to be a police officer.
>>CORRECT!
I think police officer must have good fitness and high social responsibility but I am a bit introverted person so it\'s not for me.
>>I think a police officer must have good fitness and high social awareness because of their responsibility but I am a bit introverted person so it\'s not for me.
However, people around me who want to work at police station always say they hope to become a help to public.
>>However, people around me who want to work at police station always say they hope to become help the public.
So, whenever I hear it, I feel respectful to them.
>>CORRECT!
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