Have you ever thought of giving up your holiday due to unavoidable reasons? Discuss in 3 to 5 senten
학생이 쓴 원문
It was children’s day. I was very happy, and I can’t sleep well.
However, I had a very important level up test in my math academy. Because of that test I can’t go to any places that I wanted to go. I was so sad. However, I passed all the tests! I really wanted to go these places. So I talked with my parents, and I will go on summer vacation.
강사 첨삭
Hey, [이름]. Thank you for taking the time to check the homework section. Congratulations on passing all the tests. I hope you will have a wonderful time during the summer vacation. Have fun! ~Teacher Jane c\",)
It was children’s day.
>> It was Children’s Day.
I was very happy, and I can’t sleep well.
>> CORRECT =)
However, I had a very important level up test in my math academy.
>> However, I had a very important level-up test at my math academy.
Because of that test I can’t go to any places that I wanted to go.
>> Because of that test, I can’t go to any places that I wanted to go.
I was so sad.
>> CORRECT =)
However, I passed all the tests!
>> CORRECT =)
I really wanted to go these places.
>> I really wanted to go to these places.
So I talked with my parents, and I will go on summer vacation.
>> CORRECT =)
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