Have you ever thought of moving to another job/company ?

2019-11-27 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

학생이 쓴 원문

I have also ever thought of moving to another job/company. But I am still working at the same company. Because I thought that I could not endure a new situation. Specially, I could not drink a lot of alcohol. Most people of financial part of company like drinking an alcohol. So, If I move to the other company, I have to drink a lot of alcohol to be familiar with new colleges. If I have any abilities except drinking alcohol, I would severly consider moving to other company. Example, If I am a good speaker or I have an ability to laugh other people. As well, I thought that my health was not good than other people. Whenever I worked hard, I felt easily tried. So, When I receive the task that need a long time to finish it, I can not get a confidence for it.

강사 첨삭

Hello Sir [이름]. Thank you for this. That\'s the difficult part about changing jobs and moving to another company, there are too many things to consider.
- T. Beth
=============================

I have also ever thought of moving to another job/company. 
>>>  I have also thought of moving to another job/company.  
But I am still working at the same company. Because I thought that I could not endure a new situation.
>>>  But I am still working in the same company because I thought that I could not endure a new situation.  
Specially, I could not drink a lot of alcohol. 
>>>  Specially that I could not drink a lot of alcohol.  
Most people of financial part of company like drinking an alcohol.
>>>  Most people in the financial department of a company like drinking an alcohol.
So, If I move to the other company, I have to drink a lot of alcohol to be familiar with new colleges.
>>> So, if I move to another company, I have to drink a lot of alcohol to be familiar with new colleges.   
If I have any abilities except drinking alcohol, I would severly consider moving to other company.
>>> If I have any other abilities aside from drinking alcohol, I would severely consider moving to another company.   
Example, If I am a good speaker or I have an ability to laugh other people.
>>>  Example, if I am a good speaker or I have an ability to make other people laugh.  
As well, I thought that my health was not good than other people.
>>> In addition, I think that my health is not better than other people. 
Whenever I worked hard, I felt easily tried.
>>>  correct  
So, When I receive the task that need a long time to finish it, I can not get a confidence for it.
>>>   So when I receive a task that needs a long time to finish, I don\'t fell confident about it.  

파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.

다른 영어첨삭교정 보기

영어첨삭교정 ·