Have you ever thought of setting up your own business?
학생이 쓴 원문
When I felt the difficulty at work in the hospital , I sometimes thought of setting up my own business such as a cafe, a dessert shop. Actually there are my favorite place.
강사 첨삭
Hello Amy. Thank you for this. It is nice to put up a business you are interested in. Something you think you can be good at.
- T. Beth
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When I felt the difficulty at work in the hospital , I sometimes thought of setting up my own business such as a cafe, a dessert shop. >>> When I felt the difficulty at work in the hospital, I sometimes thought of setting up my own business such as a cafe or a dessert shop.
Actually there are my favorite place.
>>> Actually, these are my favorite places.
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