Have you ever tolerated someone's behavior?(ANSWER)

2018-12-10 · 첨삭 강사 Alexia

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Now, I'm tolerating many friend's behavior. Yesterday, one of my friend pull my hair band, and my pony tail was undone. Also she push me out of my chair, and she stared at me. She didn't said sorry to me, and she said I have to say sorry to her!! I was very angry, but I tolerated..... -END-

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름],

 

 Thank you for doing your homework. ^^

 

HOMEWORK:

 

Have you ever tolerated someone\'s behavior?

Please answer in complete sentences.


YOUR ANSWER:

 

Now, I\'m tolerating many friend\'s behavior.
Yesterday, one of my friend pull my hair band, and my pony tail was undone.
Also she push me out of my chair, and she stared at me.
She didn\'t said sorry to me, and she said I have to say sorry to her!!
I was very angry, but I tolerated.....

 

   

 

 

CORRECTIONS:

 

These times, I\'m tolerating many friend\'s behavior.
Yesterday, one of my friend
pulled my hair band, and my pony tail was undone.
Also
, she pushed me out of my chair, and she stared at me.
She didn\'t
bother to say sorry to me, instead, she wants me to say sorry to her!!
I was very angry, but I controlled my emotions and tolerated the situation.

 

 

 

** Dear [이름], thank you once again for making time to share your thoughts in the homework. J  Please take note of the corrections. ^^

See you in our class. J

 

  ---------T. Alexia----------    

                       

           

                         

                         

           

             

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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