Have you ever tried any extreme sports?
학생이 쓴 원문
i didn\'t try extreme sports
to be honest i\'m such a coward
even though i don\'t have a driver’s license
and i don\'t like to go amusement park
because amusement park have extreme ride like a roller coaster
it feel like scare for me
강사 첨삭
Hi, Bella^^
I think it\'s not about being a coward.
Extreme sports and activities are just not for everyone, really.
_T. SHAY^^
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i didn\'t try extreme sports
>>I didn\'t try any extreme sports.
to be honest i\'m such a coward
>>To be honest, I\'m such a coward.
even though i don\'t have a driver’s license
>>I don\'t even have a driver\'s license.
and i don\'t like to go amusement park because amusement park have extreme ride like a roller coaster
>>And I don\'t like going to amusement parks because amusement parks have extreme rides like the roller coaster.
it feel like scare for me
I think it\'s not about being a coward.
Extreme sports and activities are just not for everyone, really.
_T. SHAY^^
***
i didn\'t try extreme sports
>>I didn\'t try any extreme sports.
to be honest i\'m such a coward
>>To be honest, I\'m such a coward.
even though i don\'t have a driver’s license
>>I don\'t even have a driver\'s license.
and i don\'t like to go amusement park because amusement park have extreme ride like a roller coaster
>>And I don\'t like going to amusement parks because amusement parks have extreme rides like the roller coaster.
it feel like scare for me
>>It feels scary to me.
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