Have you ever tried oversleeping?
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Yes, I have and still, now every Saturday is the day of oversleeping. Without burdensome, I can sleep as much as I want that day. Nowadays, my biorhythm is fixed to weekday’s schedule, so I wake up at the same time I get up to go to work every day. On Saturday once I wake up early in the morning, I try to fall asleep, but I can’t sleep as soundly as I hope. It seems like just lying on the bed not sleeping, which makes me more tired after waking up. In meanwhile, I give up falling asleep and open the window to watch the [이름]rise out of the window. It is awesome to watch the [이름]rise slowly and slowly out of a window on Saturday. I recommend my friends to see it if possible. Oversleeping is necessary to me sometimes, but I enjoy waking up early nowadays to make me refresh.
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Thank you for this [이름]!
Yes, I have and still, now every Saturday is the day of oversleeping.
Yes, I have and still, now every Saturday is the day of oversleeping.
>>> Yes, I have and I still do, every Saturday is the day for oversleeping.
Without burdensome, I can sleep as much as I want that day.
>>> OR: Without feeling burdensome, I can sleep as much as I want that day.
Nowadays, my biorhythm is fixed to weekday’s schedule, so I wake up at the same time I get up to go to work every day.
>>> correct
On Saturday once I wake up early in the morning, I try to fall asleep, but I can’t sleep as soundly as I hope.
>>> On Saturday, once I wake up early in the morning, I try to fall asleep, but I can’t sleep as soundly as I hoped.
It seems like just lying on the bed not sleeping, which makes me more tired after waking up.
>>> It seems like just lying on the bed without sleeping, which makes me more tired after waking up.
In meanwhile, I give up falling asleep and open the window to watch the [이름]rise out of the window.
>>> In a meanwhile, I give up falling asleep and open the window to watch the [이름]rise out of the window.
It is awesome to watch the [이름]rise slowly and slowly out of a window on Saturday.
>>> It is awesome to watch the [이름]rise slowly from the window on Saturday.
I recommend my friends to see it if possible.
>>> correct
Oversleeping is necessary to me sometimes, but I enjoy waking up early nowadays to make me refresh.
>>> Oversleeping is necessary to me sometimes, but I enjoy waking up early nowadays to make me feel refreshed.
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