Have you ever violated any rules? How did it feel?

2024-11-25 · 첨삭 강사 Demi

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When I was a high school student, I violated my school\'s rules. I was a senior high school and it was time to near the national colleage extrance exam. So teachers didn\'t educate their students and we studied ourselves in the classroom. At that time, I wanted to go to my own study room and study alone. Because there are students who didn\'t study and [이름]ged out with their friends. It was so noisy in the classroom. So I lied to my teacher that I am so hurt and I went to my own study room. It was good for me but I felt guilty because I lied for my teacher. So I didn\'t do that again.

강사 첨삭

Great job Nicole!
T[이름]k you for submitting your homework. Have a great day :)
~ T. Demi ^^

When I was a high school student, I violated my school\'s rules.
CORRECT!
OR>> I tried violating a school\'s rules when I was in high school.
I was a senior high school and it was time to near the national colleage extrance exam.
>>I was a senior in high school, and it was near the time of the national college entrance exam.
So teachers didn\'t educate their students and we studied ourselves in the classroom.
>> Our teachers didn\'t attend the class and we just studied by ourselves in the classroom.
At that time, I wanted to go to my own study room and study alone.
>>CORRECT!
Because there are students who didn\'t study and [이름]ged out with their friends. It was so noisy in the classroom.
>>Since there were students who didn\'t study and hung out with their friends, the classroom was noisy.
So I lied to my teacher that I am so hurt and I went to my own study room.
>> So, I lied to my teacher that I was sick and went to my own study room.
It was good for me but I felt guilty because I lied for my teacher.
>> It was good for me but I felt guilty because I lied to my teacher.
So I didn\'t do that again.
>> CORRECT!

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