Have you ever visited a place that exceeded your expectations? Which one?
학생이 쓴 원문
yes, I have been.
6 years ago, when I visited bohol island that place was exceeded my expectations.
this island has a vanilla sky, a sunset and beaches those things are fantastical and idealistic.
as well as, I could enough unwind with scuba diving
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
That sounds amazing! Thanks for sharing your wonderful experience in Bohol Island. Scuba diving there must have been incredible!
~Kelly^^
yes, I have been.
>> Yes, I have.
6 years ago, when I visited bohol island that place was exceeded my expectations.
>> Six years ago, when I visited Bohol Island, that place exceeded my expectations.
this island has a vanilla sky, a sunset and beaches those things are fantastical and idealistic.
>> This island has a vanilla sky, beautiful sunsets, and beaches that are fantastical and idealistic.
as well as, I could enough unwind with scuba diving
>> Additionally, I could unwind with scuba diving.
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