Have you ever volunteered to help victims of natural disasters? How?
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I don\'t have experienced yet.
Many Korean guys experienced volunteer when they are solders.
For example, my co-worker did volunteer to clean sea after oil leaking of sea In 2007.
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Good afternoon [이름]!
I hope you can also experience how it feels like to volunteer. The feeling is rewarding.
~Kelly^^
I don\'t have experienced yet.
>> I have not experienced it yet.
Many Korean guys experienced volunteer when they are solders.
>> Many Korean guys experienced volunteering when they become soldiers.
For example, my co-worker did volunteer to clean sea after oil leaking of sea In 2007.
>> For example, my co-worker did volunteer to clean the sea after an oil leaked in 2007.
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