Have you ever wished that you have a sibling?
학생이 쓴 원문
Yeah, I wanted to go with my siblings at least once.Because I\'m alone every day because of my parents\' work and I don\'t think I\'ll be bored if I have siblings.
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Have you ever wished that you have a sibling?
Yeah, I wanted to go with my siblings at least once.
>>> Yes, I would like to have a sibling.
OR: Yes, I would like to experience having a sibling at least once.
Because I\'m alone every day because of my parents\' work and I don\'t think I\'ll be bored if I have siblings.
>>> Because I\'m always alone everyday because my parents are busy working. I also think that I\'ll never feel bored if I have a sibling.
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