Have you ever written a story or an article that was included in your school magazine?

2015-08-14 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

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Actually, I have not written a story or an article that was included in my school magazine. And also, I don't like writing something. I'm writing many things, and it is just because I have to write as essay for English test. Honestly, I want to be a good writer although I don't like writing.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Mr. [이름]!^^ You were a bit funny because you want to be a good writer but you writing is not your cup of tea.^^ I hope you will find passion in writing.^^ See you later!^^~~Teacher Erine~~ Actually, I have not written a story or an article that was included in my school magazine.>> CorrectAnd also, I don\'t like writing something.>> CorrectI\'m writing many things, and it is just because I have to write as essay for English test.>> I am writing many things and they are just because I have to write as an essay in an English test. Honestly, I wan t to be a good writer although I don\'t like writing. >>Correct

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