Have you experienced having fake friends with bad intentions? Why do you think they befriended you?
학생이 쓴 원문
Actually, I\'ve experienced before. He tried to get along with me well. And then he said that \"Hey Elic can you lend me some money?\". So I answered \"No never do it\" I realized that he\'s making friends to borrow money.
강사 첨삭
Nice sentences, Elic! I loved how you shared about your experiences which were very relatable. You also had \"active voice\" sentences, next time, try to put them in \"passive voice\", just like what I did with items 3 and 4. But overall, you did great! Have a nice day ahead!
- Teacher Raven :)
>> Actually, I\'ve experienced that before.
He tried to get along with me well.
>> Correct.
And then he said that \"Hey Elic can you lend me some money?\".
>> And then he asked me if he could borrow some money from me.
So I answered \"No never do it\"
>> I told him that I won\'t do it.
I realized that he\'s making friends to borrow money.
>> Correct. OR I realized that he\'s only making friends with me so he could borrow some money.
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