Have you felt stress recently?
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Company in which i work is in order-receiving industry.
>> The company in which I work for is an order-receiving industry.
Due to these characteristics, we are under fluctuation work-load.
>> Due to these characteristics, we are under the fluctuation work-load.
Nowadays, we have contracted many projects which are for construction of power plant.
>> Nowadays, we have contracted many projects which are for the construction of power plants.
We have conducted almost ten projects, and prepared new two projects in advance.
>> CORRECT!
So all our team members are very busy.
>> So all of our team members are very busy.
However our working time have been constrainted by new labor law (52 hour works per a week)
>> However, our working time have been constrained by a new labor law which is 52 working hours per a week.
Because of this situation, i should conduct my work under limited time.
>> Because of this situation, I should conduct working under limited time.
It cause me stress very much.
>> It causes me a lot of stress.
I hope that HR provide us with as many supplementary workers as necessary.
>> I hope that the HR will provide us with as many supplementary workers as necessary.
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