Have you had any conflicts at school and if so, how did you deal with them?
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Have you had any conflicts at school with your friends? Some could be yes, and someone could be no. But I conflicted with my best fiend Ari Lee many times. First, I conflict with Ari Lee in school when we were playing in recess because I bought a new pencilcase so my other friends Jenny and Alice came to see my pencilcase,too. So I allowed them to see it and touch it but Ari lee brought it to her desk and didn\'t give it back to me eventhough I said stop. So I conflict with her that day.
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Have you had any conflicts at school with your friends?
>>CORRECT
Some could be yes, and someone could be no.
>>CORRECT
But I conflicted with my best fiend Ari Lee many times.
>>I had a conflict with my best friend Ari Lee many times.
First, I conflict with Ari Lee in school when we were playing in recess because I bought a new pencilcase so my other friends Jenny and Alice came to see my pencilcase,too.
>>First,I had a conflict with Ari Lee in school when we were playing during recess because I bought a new pencil case so my other friends- Jenny and Alice came to see my pencil case too.
So I allowed them to see it and touch it but Ari lee brought it to her desk and didn\'t give it back to me eventhough I said stop.
>>I allowed them to see it and touch it but Ari Lee brought it to her desk and didn\'t give it back to me even thought I said \"stop\".
So I conflict with her that day.
>>So, I had a conflict with her that day.
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