Have you heard about a man who got married his dog
학생이 쓴 원문
They even had a wedding ceremony in Austrailia.
Oh my~!
I love a dog but I don't want to marry him. uh...
He stressed that he fell in platonic love.
There are many different love types and I am quite generous about
love. But It is not easy to understand.
I need a man who loves and takes care of me like my boyfriend.
Perhaps he is a man who doesn't need a verbal comfort I think which
is very imporatant thing to woman.
of course I know men are different with women. but it is not a sex
but a aspect of character.
Anyway, I am worried about your condition.
What happened? Take care lei~~~
강사 첨삭
Hi J!!! Wow, this is a weird news. A man marrying his dog. It's the first time. ^^ Anyways, I got colds.My boyfriend and I went our last weekend and I didn't bring my jacket. I didn't expect it to be so cold maybe that's the reason why I am having clogged nose now. But anyways, I'll be better. So don't worry about me okay. Take care girl. See you on Wednesday!!!
Lei J
They even had a wedding ceremony in Austrailia.
>>correct
Oh my~!
>>correct
I love a dog but I don't want to marry him. uh...
>>I love dogs but I don?t want tp marry one..
He stressed that he fell in a platonic love.
>>correct
There are many different love types and I am quite generous about love.
>>There are many kinds of love, and I am quite generous about it.
But It is not easy to understand.
>>correct
I need a man who will love and takes care of me like my boyfriend.
>>correct
Perhaps he is a man who doesn't need a verbal comfort I think which is very imporatant thing to
women.
>>correct
of course I know men are different with women.
>>correct
but it is not a sex but a aspect of character.
>>But it is not about sex difference but it's an aspect of character.
Anyways, I am worried about your condition.
>>correct
What happened? Take care lei~~~
>>correct
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