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If the situation occurs, I\'ll consider it. But I think about important how long I stay there in Africa. And I want to work at a foreign airline for one time.
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If the situation occurs, I\'ll consider it.
>>> CORRECT!
OR >>> If the situation permits, I will definitely consider it.
But I think about important how long I stay there in Africa.
>>> But I have to think about the length of staying in Africa.
And I want to work at a foreign airline for one time.
>>> And I want to work at a foreign airline in the meantime.
>>> And I want to work at a foreign airline for the rest of my life.
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