Have you heard of stories where people beg for money but in fact they are rich? Share it in writing.
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A terrific Friday to you Sir [이름]!
It\'s the end of the line again.
Finally, you can take a rest! Yipee!
I know that you are really waiting for the weekend.
You deserve to treat yourself.
Anyway, thank you for sending this in.
You are doing a marvelous job these days.
I can say that your writing skill improved.
Just be consistent with your verb tenses when you compose your sentence.
I know you can do it. I don\'t want to try it, it will be more difficult to beg for some money than working in the office. Hihihihi!
I\'d better work until I die. Hihihi! See you in class.
Teacher Nina
There was sensational news a few years ago in Seoul, Korea.
>> There was a sensational news a few years ago in Seoul, Korea.
There was a guy who was living on the street.
>> Correct!
For a certain reason, he was stopped and inspected by a policeman.
>> Correct!
The police checked the small back bag that he was carrying and found out that there was more than thousand dollars in it.
>> Correct!
>> OR: The police checked the small backpack that he has and found out that there was more than a thousand dollars in it.
The police questioned him, suspecting that he might have thieved or robbed the money.
>> Correct!
He insisted on his innocent, saying it was his money.
>> He insisted on his innocence, saying it was his money.
He added he had more than million dollars in his bank account.
>> Correct!
Police inspected his account and it turned out that what he said was true.
>> Correct!
>> OR: The police inspected his account and it turned out that it was true.
He inherited a fortune from his parents.
>> Correct!
Being asked why he was living on the street, he said he felt free to live that way.
>> Correct!
>> Better: Being asked why he was living on the street, he said that he felt free to live that way.
He added he could not sleep in the house or a hotel because he felt bound.
>> He added that he could not sleep in the house or a hotel because he felt bound.
This is a rare case.
>> Correct!
There might be some beggars who are actually rich.
>> Correct!
Do you want to try?
>> Correct!
However, begging itself could be a tough job.
>> Correct!
There is no an easy job to make money in the world.
>> There is no easy way to make money in the world.
>> OR: There is no easy job to make money in the world.
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