Have you heard the expression, “be kind, for everyone you meet is fighting a hard battle”? What does
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Just off top of my head, the sentence above seems to suggest to have a heart on every one who is at the battle field of life. Knowing how tired and exhausted many people get from their battle in life, we’d better go easy on each other giving others a break rather than striving to step on each other. I believe that life can be heaven or hell depending on how we treat others. If we treat other as enemies or competitors to overcome, our life can be a restless wrestling without stopping. But if we try to get along with each other or treat others as coworker or partner to work with. Life is sure to be full of harmony with people. Therefore, it matters what kind of perspective toward life we have. And no matter what sort of attitude toward life, we should bear a mind that the consequences are up to us, not others.
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Hello, Mr. [Name]! Thank you for sharing your thoughts on this. I hope everyone becomes more aware and treat each other a little kinder each day.
-T. Sonny
Just off top of my head, the sentence above seems to suggest to have a heart on every one who is at the battle field of life. >>Just off the top of my head, the sentence above seems to suggest having a heart for everyone who is on the battlefield of life.
Knowing how tired and exhausted many people get from their battle in life, we’d better go easy on each other giving others a break rather than striving to step on each other.
>>Knowing how exhausted many people get from their battles in life, we’d better go easy on each other giving others a break rather than striving to step on each other.
I believe that life can be heaven or hell depending on how we treat others.
>>Correct!
If we treat other as enemies or competitors to overcome, our life can be a restless wrestling without stopping.
>>If we treat others as enemies or competitors to overcome, our life can be an endless, restless wrestling.
But if we try to get along with each other or treat others as coworker or partner to work with.
>>But not if we try to get along with each other or treat others as coworkers or partners to work with.
Life is sure to be full of harmony with people.
>>Life would surely be full of harmony for everyone.
Therefore, it matters what kind of perspective toward life we have.
>>Correct!
And no matter what sort of attitude toward life, we should bear a mind that the consequences are up to us, not others.
>>And no matter what attitude toward life we have, we should bear in mind that the consequences are up to us, not others.
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