Have you made any recent changes in your life?
학생이 쓴 원문
Recently I\\\'ve been living with simple life style and that is very helpful to use my energy on the things that really matter to me.
I read a book about minimalism and the author says that we should throw away what we don\\\'t really need to simplify our life style.
So these days I deliberate a lot before I make a purchase and clean my place by remaining the only things I really need.
For doing that, I realized that I was wasting a lot of energy on maintaining what I have.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]. I missed your compositions and I am glad to have you back. I think people should start practicing minimalism. Thank you for accomplishing a well-done homework. I appreciate it and I look forward to more. Have a good evening. ~Teacher Jane c\",)
Recently I\\\'ve been living with simple life style and that is very helpful to use my energy on the things that really matter to me.
>>> Recently, I have been living with a simple lifestyle and it is a very helpful way to use/ spend my energy on things that really matter to me.
I read a book about minimalism and the author says that we should throw away what we don\\\'t really need to simplify our life style.
>>> I read a book about minimalism and the author says that we should throw away what we do not really need to simplify our life.
So these days I deliberate a lot before I make a purchase and clean my place by remaining the only things I really need.
>>> So these days I deliberate a lot before I make a purchase and I cleaned my place by keeping the only things I really need.
For doing that, I realized that I was wasting a lot of energy on maintaining what I have.
>>> After doing that, I realized that I was wasting a lot of energy on maintaining/ keeping what I have.
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