Have you made any recent changes in your life?

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Grammar is one of the most important concepts in human communication, so we need to fix the basics so that we can communicate well using the English language.

T. Jeny

Thesedays I`ve been tried new sports like a swim[이름]g and soccer. 

>>These days, I`ve been trying new sports like swim[이름]g and soccer. 
 by joining soccer club I had a chance to get along with a lot of people.

>>By joining a soccer club, I had a chance to get along with a lot of people.

They has a various job like teacher,nurse,engineer and a film maker.

>>They have various jobs like teacher, nurse, engineer and film maker.
After finishing the match, we shared information for theirs work. because of them It help me to expect that what type industrial will be promising in the near future.

>>After finishing the match, we shared information about their jobs and because of them it helped me expect what type of industry is promising in the near future.
 In accordance with theirs advice, I will make an effort to develop my ablities to prepare the future.

>>In accordance with their advice, I will make an effort to develop my abilities to prepare for the future.