Have you made any recent changes in your life?

2019-04-15 · 첨삭 강사 Lainey

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Yes. Recently, I\'m making many changes in my life. At the end of the last year and the beginning of this year, I had a hard time worrying my future. I just graduated undergraduate study at an art university and I needed to decide intending career. Besides, unstable relationship with my friends bothered me as well. Even though this hardship, I struggle to solve this problem. To challenge this matter, I should take my time and accept myself. And I took up doing small things regularly. Fortunately, it worked. It was a great help for me. Studying English with Lainey was a part of that small struggles. Thankfully, many acquaintance (like Lainey ;) ) keep listening attentively and with this kindheartedness I could recover. After coming back to Seoul, I was taken on by a gallerist. From time to time it makes me exhausted, but now I\'m familiar this job and I\'m going through another challenges delightfully.

강사 첨삭

Hi Su ^^


Yes. Recently, I\'m making many changes in my life.

>>> correct


At the end of the last year and the beginning of this year, I had a hard time worrying my future.

>>> Last year and the beginning of this year, I had a hard time because I was worrying about my future.


I just graduated undergraduate study at an art university and I needed to decide intending career.

>>> I just  undergraduate study at an art university and I needed to decide my intending career.


 Besides, unstable relationship with my friends bothered me as well.

>>> correct


Even though this hardship, I struggle to solve this problem.

>>> Even if its challenging, I struggle to solve this problem.


To challenge this matter, I should take my time and accept myself.

>>> correct


And I took up doing small things regularly.

>>> And I make sure I\'m doing small things regularly.


Fortunately, it worked.

>>> correct


It was a great help for me.

>>> correct


Studying English with Lainey was a part of that small struggles.

>>> correct


Thankfully, many acquaintance (like Lainey ;) ) keep listening attentively and with this kindheartedness I could recover.

>>> correct


After coming back to Seoul, I was taken on by a gallerist.

>>> After coming back to Seoul, I worked at an art gallery.


From time to time it makes me exhausted, but now I\'m familiar this job and I\'m going through another challenges delightfully.

>>> From time to time it makes me exhausted, but now I\'m familiar with this job and I\'m going through another challenges delightfully.

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