Have you ordered food in English?

2022-07-14 · 첨삭 강사 Maine

학생이 쓴 원문

I never have ordered food in English in Korea. When I was go to the pillipines and Malaysia I ordered food in English. But at that time I\'m really not good at English. Actually I can\'t remember what I said. I just pointed the menu paper to staff. \'\' please give me this one and this\'\' \'\' one coke and one orange juice please.\'\' Then they notice my order. At that time, I didn\'t try to speak well in English. I was not interested in English. Now I think about that experience it is opportunity that can be talk with someone in English. If I have same opportunity I want to speak better than past

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름] [이름]!
Try to order food in English as well.   Use your available time to focus on English and always give your best shot to improve your skills.  Learn from your mistakes. ^^


~T. Maine

I never have ordered food in English in Korea. 
>> I have never ordered food in English in Korea
When I was go to the pillipines and Malaysia I ordered food in English.
>>When I went to the Philippines and Malaysia, I ordered food in English. 
But at that time I\'m really not good at English. 
>> But at that time, I was really not good at English. 
Actually I can\'t remember what I said.
>>Actually, I can\'t remember what I said. 
I just pointed the menu paper to staff.
>>I  just pointed at the menu to the staff. 
\'\' please give me this one and this\'\' \'\' one coke and one orange juice please.\'\' Then they notice my order.
>>\"I said, \"Please give me this one and this\" or \"One coke and one juice please.\"  Then they notice my order. 
At that time, I didn\'t try to speak well in English. I was not interested in English. 
>> At that time, I didn\'t try to speak well in English.  I was not interested at all. 
Now I think about that experience it is opportunity that can be talk with someone in English.
>>Now, I think about the experience.  It is an opportunity that we can communicate using English. 
If I have same opportunity I want to speak better than past
>>If I have the same opportunity, I want to speak better than the past. 

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