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I am planning to move house. A house I want to buy is more expensive than my house. I should borrow money from a bank, and I am going to pay back the money for 30 years. It\'s my first time to borrow big money from the bank. I am little bit worry about it. Many korean buy houses for investment purposes. I am not the person. I want to move to the new house because my house is so cold in winter.
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I am planning to move house.
- I am planning to move houses.
A house I want to buy is more expensive than my house.
- CORRECT.
I should borrow money from a bank, and I am going to pay back the money for 30 years.
- CORRECT.
>>> - I should borrow money from a bank, and I am going to return it for 30 years.
It\'s my first time to borrow big money from the bank.
- It\'s my first time borrowing a large sum of money from the bank.
I am little bit worry about it.
- I am a little bit worried about it.
Many korean buy houses for investment purposes.
- Many Koreans buy houses for investment purposes.
I am not the person.
- CORRECT.
>>> I am not like that.
I want to move to the new house because my house is so cold in winter.
- I want to move to the new house because my house is freezing in the winter.
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