Have you thought about the location for your cafe? What\'s your ideal spot?
학생이 쓴 원문
I want to establish my cafe like cocktail bar. I went on a trip alone in this summer, and I went a cafe which made like cocktail bar by chance. I like it.
I will bar table to talk my customers, and I recommend them my own special menu. And I want to install some small sculpture to make my place more cozy.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Hyebin! That\'s a fantastic idea! It\'s wonderful that you found inspiration during your trip. Creating a cozy atmosphere with small sculptures is a unique touch. Let\'s aim for that future cafe. ^^ Thanks for sharing, Hyebin. Have a nice day ahead!
~T. Jade^^
~T. Jade^^
Homework: Have you thought about the location for your cafe? What\'s your ideal spot?
I want to establish my cafe like cocktail bar.
>> I want to establish my cafe like a cocktail bar.
I went on a trip alone in this summer, and I went a cafe which made like cocktail bar by chance.
>> I went on a trip alone this summer, and I stumbled upon a cafe that was designed like a cocktail bar.
I like it.
>> Correct
I will bar table to talk my customers, and I recommend them my own special menu.
I will bar table to talk my customers, and I recommend them my own special menu.
>> I will have a bar table to talk to my customers, and I will recommend my own special menu to them.
And I want to install some small sculpture to make my place more cozy.
>> I want to install some small sculptures to make my place cozier.
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