Have you traveled to other places?
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When I was young I traveled abroad a lot.
Unfortuately we can\'t any kinds of trip for Corona virus.
The place I recently tarveled abroad was Cebu island in February last year.
That trip was for our couple to relax and heal without my daughters.
We enjoyed the luxury resort and sea circumstances.
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Have you traveled to other places?When I was young, I traveled abroad a lot.
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or>>During my younger days, I went overseas a lot.
Unfortuately we can\'t any kinds of trip for Corona virus.
>>Unfortunately, we can\'t go on any kind of traveling because of the Coronavirus.
Unfortuately we can\'t any kinds of trip for Corona virus.
>>Unfortunately, we can\'t go on any kind of traveling because of the Coronavirus.
The place I recently tarveled abroad was Cebu island in February last year.
>>The most recent travel I did abroad was in an island in Cebu City, in February of last year.
That trip was for our couple to relax and heal without my daughters.
That trip was for our couple to relax and heal without my daughters.
>>It was a couple trip for my husband and I only, in order for us to relax and heal without our daughters.
We enjoyed the luxury resort and sea circumstances.
We enjoyed the luxury resort and sea circumstances.
>>We enjoyed the luxury resort and the nice atmosphere of the sea.
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