Have you tried eating exotic food before? If yes, what is it? If not, will you be willing to try?

2022-07-11 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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Of course, I\'ve eaten exotic food. And I love to try to eat foods in another country. I remember a lot of things like Dimsum, Chili shrimp, Vietnamese rice noodles, Pasta that Italian runs, etc. The pasta was crazy, I felt that It made me fall into the ocean. :)

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Hi Elic!  

Oh, those are foreign foods. Exotic foods are unusual kinds of food. :) 

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Of course, I\'ve eaten exotic food. 
>> CORRECT

And I love to try to eat foods in another country. 
>> CORRECT

I remember a lot of things like Dimsum, Chili shrimp, Vietnamese rice noodles, Pasta that Italian runs, etc. 
>> I remember a lot of things like Dimsum, Chili shrimp, Vietnamese rice noodles, Italian pasta, and many more.  

The pasta was crazy, I felt that It made me fall into the ocean. :)
>> The pasta was crazy, I felt that it made me fall into the ocean. :)

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