Have you tried feeding a giraffe?
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No, I don\'t have tried feeding a giraffe.
When I go to amusement park, I often go to the zoo in there.
But, I\'ve never tried feeding a giraffe, because it was too tall and huge, so I was scared.
I like just watching animals.
강사 첨삭
Hi Kara! ^^
When I go to amusement park, I often go to the zoo in there.
But, I\'ve never tried feeding a giraffe, because it was too tall and huge, so I was scared.
>> I never tried feeding a giraffe, though because it\'s too tall and huge so I was scared.
I agree that giraffes are pretty cute but also scary.
I have seen many videos of people feeding the giraffes.
The giraffes don\'t seem to be dangerous.
Andrea
No, I don\'t have tried feeding a giraffe.
>> Correct
When I go to amusement park, I often go to the zoo in there.
>> When I go to an amusement park, I often go to the zoo.
But, I\'ve never tried feeding a giraffe, because it was too tall and huge, so I was scared.
>> I never tried feeding a giraffe, though because it\'s too tall and huge so I was scared.
I like just watching animals.
>> I just like looking at the animals.
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