Have you tried going to a place that you\'re not familiar with?

2019-03-18 · 첨삭 강사 May

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I used to hate going to travel alone. However, I decided to take a trip alone when I was in the UAE. Because my close friend was living in Germany and she wanted me to visit her house. It was challenging to visit a place which I haven\'t been before. Actually, I don\'t enjoy preparing a trip, so I always regret about my preparations because I don\'t have a sense of direction, that\'s why I don\'t know where my way around. Anyway, I went to Germany even if I had a lot of problem taking a trip alone. There were not special trouble to find my fiend\'s house. We met on time that we expected and had a good time. She gave me local food with delicious wine and we were talking about the time when we were in the university. After one night, I went to another city which I would like to visit. I thought I felt bored . it was more of excited to see a beautiful sight without any interference such as children\'s annoying. I miss the time I was having in Germany and I would go to travel alone, if I ha

강사 첨삭

Thanks for sharing your experiences! It might be scary and dangerous to travel alone

but it will be lesson and an experience to have. ^6

~~May~~

I used to hate going to travel alone.

>> I used to hate traveling alone.

However, I decided to take a trip alone when I was in the UAE. Because my close friend was living in Germany and she wanted me to visit her house.

>> However, I decided to go on a trip alone when I was in the UAE because my close friend was living in Germany and she wanted me to visit her house.

It was challenging to visit a place which I haven\'t been before.

>> CORRECT

Actually, I don\'t enjoy preparing a trip, so I always regret about my preparations because I don\'t have a sense of direction, that\'s why I don\'t know where my way around.

>> Actually, I don\'t enjoy preparing for a trip, so I always regret about my preparations because I don\'t know about directions that\'s why I don\'t know where to go.

Anyway, I went to Germany even if I had a lot of problem taking a trip alone.

>> Anyway, I went to Germany even if I had a lot of problems travelling alone.

There were not special trouble to find my fiend\'s house.

>> I didn\'t have a hard time looking for my friend\'s house.

We met on time that we expected and had a good time.

>> We met on time that expectedly and had a good time.

She gave me local food with delicious wine and we were talking about the time when we were in the university.

>> She offered me a local food with delicious wine and we talked about our university life.

After one night, I went to another city which I would like to visit.

>> CORRECT

I thought I felt bored.

>> I thought I would feel bored.
it was more of excited to see a beautiful sight without any interference such as children\'s annoying.

>> I got more excited to go sightseeing without any disturbances.

I miss the time I was having in Germany and I would go to travel alone, if I ha

>> I miss the time I had in Germany and I would travel alone

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